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Lupin
Posted: Tuesday, August 19, 2008 3:36:27 AM

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I'm working on a painting across 2 canvases. It's about "The Velveteen Rabbit" and how the Skin Horse believed that he was real and that nobody could take that away from him. It's also about how the toys get burned at the end of the story and the fairy only saves the Velveteen Rabbit and not the Skin Horse. That shit has always bothered me about this story.

The Fairy says, "I am the nursery magic Fairy. I take care of all the playthings that the children have loved. When they are old and worn out and the children don't need them anymore, I come and take them away with me and turn them into Real."

The Skin Horse was loved by the boy's uncle! The Skin Horse was worn out and not needed anymore either. The Skin Horse matches all of the criteria for becoming Real. (Which they capitalize for some odd reason.) Yet, she leaves the Skin Horse to burn. I'll have pngs or jpgs of my paintings later. It's kinda late right now.

I just finished painting the first canvas. This shit took 7 hours or so. It's the small canvas (8"X11"Winky! I'm going to paint a larger canvas (maybe a 15"x12"Winky.

Lupin
Posted: Tuesday, August 19, 2008 3:44:34 AM

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It was my first time working on canvas. It's a lot different from cold press illustration boards but in some ways better. I couldn't do an acrylic wash the way I wanted to. It works differently on illustration boards. However the canvas didn't rush to absorb my paint. So I wouldn't say this is better, it's just different.

I won't have the completed painting up for a few weeks since I'm out of money and the canvas that I need to buy is about 10-15 bucks.

KittyKatAna
Posted: Saturday, August 23, 2008 6:17:29 PM

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Wow. I really like it.
Lupin
Posted: Saturday, August 23, 2008 10:25:31 PM

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Thanks. I bought the other canvas and I drew out the image. I just haven't gotten around to actually painting it yet.

KittyKatAna
Posted: Saturday, August 23, 2008 10:38:25 PM

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I have wanted to paint like that for a long time.
Lupin
Posted: Saturday, August 23, 2008 11:20:00 PM

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You just gotta do it. I'd recommend after you start your comic. Because I've noticed that a good drawing helps make a good painting. Problem is that canvas gets expensive. My friend told me how to make my own canvases and if I keep on painting I might start doing it.

Blue
Posted: Sunday, August 24, 2008 8:56:51 PM

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Oh wow, you're going to do a comic too? That makes three of us XD

I'm following in the footsteps of my favorite webcomic artist TiredOrangeCat (No offense to you Lupin XP) and planning the entire story in advance... it's going slowly ^^;

Lupin
Posted: Monday, August 25, 2008 6:29:00 PM

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Trust me. I've heard worse. One of Lupin's myspace friends was talking to him/me about how he wanted to do a web comic. I want to help out my readers, so I tell him that if he needs any advice or anything then he shouldn't be a stranger (By the way, this offer goes out to you too, Blue). He then says something along the lines of "I don't need your help. I'm going to get my influences from good web comics like VGCats and Penny Arcade."

I was just like, "Wow, what a dick."

I was just offering help and instead of going "Oh, okay, thanks," and then never asking me for any advice he just used it to talk shit.

But, yeah, no worries, Blue. If you said that I was your favorite web cartoonist then I would probably just think that you don't read very many comics. Really I don't think I even have enough comics up for anyone to call me their favorite cartoonist.


Anyway aside from my ego, what's your comic about, if you don't mind sharing? Don't worry about it going slowly. This is the stage to take your time. You have no update schedule and this is where you're building the foundation of your comic. I see many web comics simply die because the web cartoonist lacked the foresight to write the story ahead of time. They then write themselves into a corner and give up. If you read Staccato then you can see this happen over and over again. He doesn't end a story arc...ever! Yet, it's considered one of the top gaming comics. Why is beyond me. It's really good but without ever having an ending it's just trash. imo.

I spent a year writing my web comic out. Most of my web comic was written in 2006. However just because I wrote that shit in 2006 it doesn't mean that I'm going to stick strictly to the script...

Blue
Posted: Monday, August 25, 2008 9:11:01 PM

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Heh, I'd really rather not go into detail about what it's about. But if you'd like, stop by my journal on DA. I just "announced" my intentions by using one of the questionaires, but answering it with my three main characters instead of me. I thought it'd be a neat way to introduce them.

http://bluetiger06.deviantart.com/

Lupin
Posted: Monday, August 25, 2008 10:38:51 PM

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I actually just set up a DA account last week. http://yourfaceisacomic.deviantart.com/

Wow, this is really more than what I expected. Many people give a plot synopsis but I think you actually understand that story is more about character than plot (actually plot is just a tool used to tell a story but plot has nothing to do with story). Considering how well you know your characters I think it would be safe to expect great things from this.

Now from that interview, I wanna see what I can induce from the information given.

I'm assuming that Caden is probably a noble wolf and Drake is a dragon. I'm basing that upon Caden liking rabbit and Drake because "Drake" means "Dragon."

Caden is the leader and Drake is the "beta wolf" of sorts who probably gets into trouble by not listening to Caden, who is probably the wisest of the group (and the noble archetypal hero).

I'm guessing that this is some sort of traveling hero's journey plot structure. BTW Ally is so not making it back. I think there might be a little bit of a love interest between Caden and Drake.

I can guarantee that Caden uses a sword. Possibly a huge one.

Drake killed his dad but the circumstances ultimately justify his actions but he'll never believe that he's anything but the worst person imaginable.

Blue
Posted: Tuesday, August 26, 2008 1:51:38 PM

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Heh, that was a lot. I'll just have to do it point-by-point

Lupin wrote:
Wow, this is really more than what I expected. Many people give a plot synopsis but I think you actually understand that story is more about character than plot (actually plot is just a tool used to tell a story but plot has nothing to do with story). Considering how well you know your characters I think it would be safe to expect great things from this.

Well thanks, I'm flattered ^//^

Lupin wrote:
I'm assuming that Caden is probably a noble wolf and Drake is a dragon. I'm basing that upon Caden liking rabbit and Drake because "Drake" means "Dragon."

Drake's left arm is enlarged, super-strong, and covered in dull grey unbreakable scales. So... kind of a dragon. Caden is not a wolf though, he's actually my first fursona which I was using up until a few months ago, a blue tiger.

Lupin wrote:
Caden is the leader and Drake is the "beta wolf" of sorts who probably gets into trouble by not listening to Caden, who is probably the wisest of the group (and the noble archetypal hero).

Nope, no one is really the leader. Caden tends to "take command" because he just acts forcing the others to follow his lead or leave him, so they usually follow him.

Lupin wrote:
I'm guessing that this is some sort of traveling hero's journey plot structure. BTW Ally is so not making it back. I think there might be a little bit of a love interest between Caden and Drake.

There is some travling involved, but that's because they've been forced from their homes. You're right about someone not making it back (even though they never really go "back" ), but it isn't Ally.

EDIT: Also, no there isn't a love intrest between Drake and Caden. Almost forgot that.

Lupin wrote:
I can guarantee that Caden uses a sword. Possibly a huge one.

Nope, I haven't decided yet, but none of them use weapons at the start. Although I may have Caden use a poorly made bo staff (poorly made because he made it himself).

Lupin wrote:
Drake killed his dad but the circumstances ultimately justify his actions but he'll never believe that he's anything but the worst person imaginable.

Quiet the opposite

Lupin
Posted: Tuesday, August 26, 2008 8:53:53 PM

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Wonderful. I went with the mostly cliche things. Seeing that I'm wrong is showing even more promise for your work.

However, your potential is limited by your ability to take criticism. Remember that. This applies with all aspects of life. Web comicking can be a cruel game to play.

Blue
Posted: Wednesday, August 27, 2008 11:00:07 AM

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Yeah >>

Actually I'm surprised you didn't make any assumtions about Ally, not that I gave you alot to work with. But yeah, she's really mute so it felt wrong to have her "say" anything at all.

Lupin
Posted: Wednesday, August 27, 2008 4:57:48 PM

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All I could assume is that she uses a bow and arrow and or white magic/healing items. She probably has a small frame and is beautiful. She'll probably be big breasted which might get in the way of the skilled archer thing (given that I'm right about that.)

I say this because women are typically considered the nurturers and are rarely giving melee weapons unless their personality is very self-confident. Ally seems to be very meek and innocent.

I say she'll be hot because lets face it, I'm probably the only one who is trying to play down the attractiveness of my female protagonist. (It's one of those artistic choices that hinder my comic's success.)

But you're right. I didn't feel like there was enough info about Ally to make a guess.

Blue
Posted: Wednesday, August 27, 2008 5:33:35 PM

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Yeah, like I said, she's mute. You really shouldn't be able to understand her at all. Unless you know sign language. Do you know sign language?

She's supposed to be fairly pretty, but certainly not big breasted. She's supposed to be young. She doesn't use a bow and arrow, or white magic. There is no magic. She's got the most powerful "Gift" of the entire group though.

Lupin
Posted: Thursday, August 28, 2008 12:10:32 AM

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nice. Like I said I am just going with the cliche. So this is promising to stand out a little from everything else.

Blue
Posted: Monday, September 01, 2008 12:19:05 PM

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... I have to leave for a few days and this is the only post I missed?

I feel sad. Very very sad...

Lupin
Posted: Tuesday, September 02, 2008 12:09:07 AM

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you think you feel sad...A forum's activity helps indicate the success of a comic. My comic is crashing and burning. I still need more time to get the good comics in.

Blue
Posted: Wednesday, September 03, 2008 3:46:06 PM

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You'll be fine... eventually... I hope >>

Lupin
Posted: Wednesday, September 03, 2008 8:47:30 PM

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That makes two of us. You're just hoping I succeed because you know I'll put a link to your web comic when it gets off the ground, huh? jk. (But seriously I'd link you.)



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